Keep writing them«12345» You are a excellent writer with the back and forth between the scenes. You are a excellent writer with the back and forth between the scenes. xnx You are a excellent writer with the back and forth between the scenes. You may even have a future as a author. Keep writing them«12345» You may even have a future as a author. Good luck!READERReport 2007-03-14 09:08:21Don’t usually like this kind of story but this one really turned me on!! You are a excellent writer with the back and forth between the scenes. Good luck!READERReport 2007-03-14 09:08:21Don’t usually like this kind of story but this one really turned me on!! 21 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-20 13:01:13Despite referring to yourself a couple of times. …I love this story…it made me really hardanonymous readerReport 2011-08-18 23:41:30well apart from some spelling errors and the fact you said “I” and “me” a couple times it
