I’ll see if I can revise it and repost. It was better wen they were oblivious. Xxnx Jeffezy 626Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-08 03:19:19Senorlongo: Please revise part 3 so it is exceptable for the site and repost it. I have read your “Old Man and the Beach” and your newest posting and enjoyed both of them very, very much. Senorlongo«1234» The story is no good wiyhout part 3. 18 comments«1234»X-MAN215Report 2020-06-08 17:18:24cool niceAnonymous readerReport 2017-02-10 03:42:55I love this!Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-03 11:45:22Why did you let Gina and Donald find out abt H? Retired Army NCOAnonymous readerReport 2014-11-25 05:28:30Deleted–underage–although the whole story is about kids. Senorlongo«1234» 18 comments«1234»X-MAN215Report 2020-06-08 17:18:24cool niceAnonymous readerReport 2017-02-10 03:42:55I love this!Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-03 11:45:22Why did you let Gina and Donald find out abt H? The story is no good wiyhout part 3. I’ll see if I can revise it and repost. I have read your “Old Man and the Beach” and your newest
