READ IT. Xxnx One suggestion I would give you is to use a word processing program like Microsoft Word to check your spelling and grammar, then cut and paste to this forum,«123» Then read it again, then forget about it for a day or two. Sigh, I need something new!READERReport 2008-01-05 02:02:11Its got potential, you just need to be more careful before you press the submit button. READ IT. However, taking these errors out of the story, it is an excellent beginning. Write it first in Word (or similar) then after you do all the spell/grammer check stuff . As I tried to decipher what you were meaning to say, my cock deflated, much like thinking about my ex-wife. The errors do make it harder to read smoothly. Keep working and write more. One suggestion I would give you is to use a word processing program like
