Nah, rework the language a little and try again.«1» Pt.2 plzREADERReport 2007-05-31 07:57:03I thought it was awesome. Xxx I doubt very many middle aged women frequently use cunt and cum-slut in this context. its true about the way women talk when theyre gettin fucked but seriously that was a great attempt. writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. And oral cavity? writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. The language was not very believable. rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. writer, u gotta 10, for talk, the story, and the sex. Thanks heaps! rudstillhard oneREADERReport 2006-07-16 14:36:04Eh. I doubt very many middle aged women frequently use cunt and cum-slut in this context. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-14 00:09:16I really liked your story!!!
