It sounded like they were in high school, especially when the cliched truth-or-dare got thrown in. It was dominated by, “Hey, aren’t you…” and “We’re going shopping”. Xxx IF YOU WISH TO GO PUBLIC, YOU CAN! That, along with everything else (including the atrocious grammar) ruined the entire plot for me. If that wasn’t enough of a disappointment, truth or dare gets thrown into the tired mix. And what is with all the damn commas where they’re not needed?«12345» IF YOU WISH TO GO PUBLIC, YOU CAN! 192 comments«12345»steveblastsReport 2020-03-21 01:42:20Hot three way action. It has to be pretty bad before you can’t get to the end. That, along with everything else (including the atrocious grammar) ruined the entire plot for me. The author just threw her credibility out the window.
