Maybe you will improve in a few years. xnx I’m sure this is the way you talk but that is too bad. keep at it its not easy to please this lot!!!READERReport 2007-04-07 13:53:48I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn’t be able to write a story on the back of a post card. … way way way too fucking shortREADERReport 2007-04-07 10:20:46Yeah, punctuation and spelling. Maybe you will improve in a few years. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-04-07 21:18:59crap but i fink u could probs improve soon. I’m not talking about your story just your English.«12» 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-04-07 21:18:59crap but i fink u could probs improve soon. keep at it its not easy to please this lot!!!READERReport 2007-04-07 13:53:48I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn’t be able to write a story on the back of a post card. … way way way too fucking




















